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假设你是红星中学的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四

假设你是红星中学的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意.词数不少于60.提示词.游乐园amusement park 垃圾 litter 可回收的垃圾箱 recycling bin不可回收的垃圾箱non-recycling bin Our Spring Outing

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Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy.

试题分析：本文属于看图作文比较好写的题目。首先对第一幅图的内容进行描述，说明我们开班会讨论的内容及同学们各自的想法such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.最终是决定去登山go mountain climbing.然后说明我们很早出发去爬山，当到达山顶时被美景吸引但是也看到了垃圾到处都是we were shocked to see litter here and there,最后我们开始捡垃圾，将不同的垃圾继续分类，分别放入可回收的垃圾箱和不可回收的垃圾箱中we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.最后一句话结尾很累但是非常的高兴即可We were tired but happy. 点评：本文的写作不难，对于叙事类文体，对文章的条理性要把握好，在写作过程注意使用“起承转合”的词语或是句型表达，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。