Question

请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“目前，我想知道： 1. 我写的report还有哪。。。”

（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）

中文部分：
目前，我想知道：
1. 我写的report还有哪些地方需要修改吗？
2. 我认为我的report有几处需要Ref，可是我并不知道如何使用ref。
3. 因为我们3个人的report要合并成一篇完成的report，你是否需要帮助。因为只有完成了合并，我们才能打印report，以及提交report电子档。
目前，我已经在Building 11，如何需要任何帮助请告诉我。

我的翻译：
The problem I consider is right now is:
1. Is there any I could improve about my report?
2. I think I need give some ref in my report but I didn't not do this yet.
3. Do you need some help to compile our 3 report. Since I only could print this report and submit the soft report after doing this.

Now I have already in the building 11, be free to tell me if I could help.

Answer 1

The problem that I am considering now are as follows:（这里用进行时，另外，下面列举不止一项，所以用are不用is）

1. Would you please help me to figure out the places that need revision in my report?(用问句更礼貌，这里用 revision不用improve含义更精准)

2. Could you please tell me how to add references since I found them necessary in several places in my report?（问句加从句合并两个短句为一个长句更符合英文的行文习惯；ref 写全为references 显得更正式一点）

3. We can not print and submit the report until conbining the three reports into one, so please complete your own work as soon as possible.And I am glad to help if you have any problem.

I am currently working on Building 11,feel free to contact me if there is any problem.

（问是否需要帮助，其实第三点和最后一句都提到了，避免累赘，可以在两句中省去一句。）

Answer 2

这结构简直醉了。。。。
很难从小部分纠正。因为句子结构感觉有很大问题