Question

求大神帮我改下英语作文。跪求大神帮忙！！在线等！急！！！

求大神帮忙
内容不看，是要求

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Answer 1

需要怎么改？语法有几个小问题。

追问

看一下我也没有缺少的内容。错误的语法指出来

追答

内容的话可以自己检查，只要上面的词都用了就好。我认为的语法瑕疵：

1. used to be afraid of

2. help my classmates solve(to一般不写)

3. bad and difficult things

4. my shy classmates 或 one of my shy classmate

5. they will make you successful

6. A few minutes later

7. grades(笔误)

8. careful about the exams泛指

9. you will get good grades

10. change in my life is that I fall in