Question

一篇英语作文，还请大神指正。谢谢！！

Answer 1

Today's competition becomes more fiercely than any age in the history. So the success is a thing that everyone is longing for. Yet, it need more diligent and hard-working not just day dreaming. You can not get a success by fooling around and do nothing.
We know that competition is cruel. To the strong mind, it is a spring of hope; but to the weak-minded, it is a winter of despair. Therefore, we students need insist on our study. Under whatever circumstances , should we study harder than our competitors. Only in this way, can we have a little competence.
However, no matter what we do, we shall never forget our original dream and confidence. Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is mistery. Today is our gift. So, let us be brave and bravely realize our dreams. So many deeds cry out to be done and always urgently. The world rolls on, time presses. Ten thousand years are too long. Seize the day seize the hour!
以上文字中选用了本人背过的演讲的经典句子，以及“多少事，从来急，天地转，光阴迫，一万年太久，只争朝夕”，希望对你有帮助。
如有文法错误，再一起研究。

Answer 2

Many students may be confused by the problem(去掉that) how to mangae time in the college. So, at first, to make a
plan by/for yourself is very important. Only when you write down your
paln on a piece of paper, can it remind you of doing some more meaning
things,. What's more, try to spend more time on your major. Instensively studying it, asking teacher about it, (去掉and，添加you must ,look改为read) more books to improve yourself.
sleep改为 sleeping,与doing 一致；
what 改为as