Question

请帮我检查我写得这篇英文短文，感觉有很多文法上的错误。

For me, the quality I value most in a friend is that she has a lot in common with me. Because I believe if you have a friend who has something in common, like favorite idols, interests, habits, sports, ideas, and personality. We will get along with each other. If we hold differing views, I think we quarrel but soon reconcile. If 有这样的朋友在身边, I will not feel lonely in my life.

Answer 1

For me, the quality I value most of a friend is that she has a lot in common with me.好像这样更好吧：the quality of a friend, which I value most, is that she ……
interest做兴趣讲是不可数名词，应该去s，like最好换成such as，We will……不应该单独成一句，前面的if从句没主句，而且不应该是we，前面是if you后面we矛盾。
应该用different修饰views
I think we quarrel,应该加入情态动词使之与if对称，而且reconcile是及物动词，后面不能光秃秃。
If I have such friends by my side: If 有这样的朋友在身边