Question

英文语法问题

Answer 1

old lady's handbag.I did not think too much at that time, so I just stood(过去式) up and walked(过去式) towards(没有 toward to，toward是形容词不是动词，towards 才是动词，没有过去式) that old lady.I told her about everything I saw,and told her to be careful of (不是for) those teenagers. Those two teenagers might(不加be)heard what I had just said(在might 后面用过去分词,am不是过去分词也不是过去式)，so they walked towards(没有 toward to)me and said,"You(对话开头大写) are dead!" They(句子开头大写)pulled me to a corner,and just beat me up.(我想你的意思是beat up by them吧？用beat me up也可以)My face and mouth were bleeding,yet(even不可以在这里用) no one came to give me a hand ,but I was pleased (整天用happy很乏味,用pleased→欣慰更好)that I saved the old woman. After this event(incident→暴力事件）会比较好)，I learnt a lot of methods(复数)to solve these kind of problems. Firstly(+ly),I can alert the police(整天用call the police 很乏味).Secondly(+ly),I can ask some passer- by (路人) for help. Lastly(比起用第三，你也可以用最后)，I can ask the bus driver for help.In summary(总结), I had learnt that I must plan before doing anything , or else I might get into trouble.(最后这句话未能明白你的意思，所以帮你结尾了)

楼主还有个问题，这么长的文章居然没有分段，要是我这么写，早都被老师骂得狗血淋头了。。。。

改的有点乱，希望你不介意。谢谢。

Answer 2

I did not think too much at that time, so I just stood up and walked toward that old lady. I told her about everything that I saw. I also warned her about those two teenagers. However, those two youth might hear what I said, so they walked toward me and said: “You are dead!” They pulled me to a corner. They started to beat me up until my face and mouth were bleeding. Even though no one came to save me, I still feel happy because I saved the old lady. After this event, I learned how to deal with these kinds of problems. First, I should call 911 to let the police know. Second, I should ask someone near by to help. Or I can tell the bus driver to help me out. From this I knew that I must plan before I act, otherwise, I will be paying for my actions.

Good luck with rest of your paper!