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英语短文改错，谢谢各位，麻烦大家了

Water is the "life blood"of our earth.It is on every living thing.It is in air.It runs through mountains and valleys.It forms lakes and oceans.Water is in everywhere.Nature has a great water system.Rain water finds their way to streams and river.Revers lead to the oceans.At the mouths of the rivers,fersh water joins the salt water of the ocean. Here at the mouth of a river it is much important plant and animal's life.Pollution destroys this life. Therefore,we have to clean our streams and rivers. Men must work with nature,not against it. 以上英语短文中有些是病句，希望大家帮个忙。谢谢了

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Water is the "life blood"of our Earth.It is in every living thing.It is in the air.It runs through the mountains and valleys.It forms lakes to oceans.Water is present in everywhere.Nature has a great water system.Rain water find their ways to streams and river.Rivers lead to the oceans.At the mouths of the rivers,fresh water joins the salt water from the ocean. Here at the mouth of a river, it is important to the plant and animal's life.Pollution destroys these lifes. Therefore,we have to clean our streams and rivers. Men must work with nature,not against it.