Question

有好评英语作文！急

Answer 1

Hello,everyone,my name is Alan,I'm 14 years old,I'm in Class Two,Grade eight.
I have many hobbies, such as collecting stamps, singing and drawing. But my favorite hobby is playing table tennis. When I was ten years old, my father took me to a table tennis course. Since then I began to love this kind of sport. Now I am on our school team so I often play table tennis for about an hour after school and I often play with my father on weekends. And I often watch table tennis games on TV,too. My favorite player is Guo Yue. I admires her very much and I want to be a table tennis player like her when I grow up
（3)、（4）自己编编吧

Answer 2

LZ的可以，不过最后一句应该是admire而不是admires，另外中间有一句Since then I began to love this kind of sport.建议把kind of删掉