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Todaywevisitafarm.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheretogether.Thefarm... Today we visit a farm.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went to there together.The farm worker gave us a warmly welecome.Then the head of the farm showed them around.What glad we were to see the crops or vegetables growing well!At noon we had picnic lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest,we had great fun singing ,dancing,and told jokes or stories.Two of us even played a game of chess.Time passed quickly.Until we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.

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Today we (visit) a farm.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went (to) there together.The farm worker gave us a (warmly) welecome.Then the head of the farm showed (them) around.(What) glad we were to see the crops (or) vegetables growing well!At noon we had picnic (a)lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest,we had great fun singing ,dancing,and (told) jokes or stories.Two of us even played a game of chess.Time passed quickly. (Until) we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.

visit 改为visited
去掉to
warmly 改为 warm
them 改为 us
what 改为 how
or 改为 and
picnic 前面加 a
told 改为 telling
until 改为 Before
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  1、Today we (visited) a farm.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and2、 went to (改为 把 to 去掉)there together.3、The farm worker gave us a warmly welecome(welcome).4Then the head of the farm showed them(us) around.5、What(How) glad we were to see the crops or vegetables growing well!6、At noon we had(a) picnic lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest,7、we had(a) great fun singing ,dancing,and 8|told(telling) jokes or stories.9\Two(Both) of us even played a game of chess.Time passed quickly10.Until(When) we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.
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  1. visit--visited 

  2. warmly--warm

  3. them--us

  4. What--How

  5. or--and

  6. had picnic lunch--had a picnic lunch

  7. told--telling

    Sorry,我只能找出这几处错误了~%>_<%

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  1. visit ---- visited  2. went to 后的to 去掉  3. worker---workers  4.warmly ---- warm   5. them --- us  6. What-- How      7. had 后面 加 a  8. told ---telling  9. Two--- Both  10. Until --- Before

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时态不对,绝对的,我可以帮你改,但是你必须告诉我,,你要用什么时态
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strew it!
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