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亲爱的的同学，你将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多的好朋友。请用英语写一篇短文，

亲爱的的同学，你将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多的好朋友。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你的好朋友Li Lei。 要点如下： 1. 他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛； 2. 他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我； 3. 我准备送他一个……以表达感谢；4. 我对他的祝福和希望；注意：1. 词数80—100；开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数； 2. 短文需包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当加以细节或发挥，使其连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。3. 参考词汇：外向 outgoing We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.

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We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei. He is not only helpful but also outgoing .Whoever has difficulty,he would try his best to help him. So he has a lot of friends ,and they are willing to help him,too.He is interested in many things,such as playing football,playing the piano,go hiking and so on.He has so excellent grades that he often helps me with my school work. I am ready to give him a meaningful gifts ----a photo album, in order to express my thanks . I wish that he could be better and better in the future.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者介绍自己的好朋友李雷，全文主要用一般现在时态。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 not only...but also, try his best , a lot of ,are willing to, is interested in ,such as,and so on, helps with,am ready to ,in order to , better and better,in the future等短语，文中还用到了条件状语从句 Whoever has difficulty; 结果状语从句He has so excellent grades that he often helps me with my school work.；宾语从句I wish that he could be better and better in the future. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。