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请你根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 There are many factors(因素) that det

请你根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 There are many factors(因素) that determine your success, of which a good habit is a key one. What are good habits in your eyes? What influence do they have on you?注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和和名称； ④词数为120左右。

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Good habits are of great importance in our life. Different people hold different beliefs on the topic. For me, a student, good habits mean being careful with and devoted to study, and trying to avoid any mistakes and unfavorable things. When in Grade One, I was terribly poor in my studies. Addicted to playing computer games, I often stayed up too late. It came as no surprise that I couldn’t’ always concentrate in class. Not until I failed the final examination did I begin to regret how much precious time I had wasted. Luckily, my head teacher offered me his timely help. He talked me into quitting the game addiction. From then on, I spared no effort to work hard at all my subjects, thus making steady progress. The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. Faced with great challenges and heavy study load, we must focus on our studies. Only in this way can we be admitted to a good university.

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮点说明】范文中出现了一些高级短语：of great importance很重要，be devoted to 致力于，offer sb sth提供某人某物 talk sb into doing说服某人做, drawing near.临近，还有复杂的多变的句型：When in Grade One, I was terribly poor in my studies. 这句话是省略句，Addicted to playing computer games, I often stayed up too late. 这句话是过去分词做状语，It came as no surprise that I couldn’t’ always concentrate in class. 这句话是it做形式主语，Not until I failed the final examination did I begin to regret how much precious time I had wasted.这句话是倒装句， I spared no effort to work hard at all my subjects, thus making steady progress.这句话用了现在分词做状语，Faced with great challenges and heavy study load, we must focus on our studies.这句话是过去分词做状语， Only in this way can we be admitted to a good university.这句话是倒装句。