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Answer 1

Dear editor,
I don't really agree with children attending too many kinds of after-school classes, because their leisure time could be occupied so much by these classes that the time which could have been taken to experience much more of life has become less a lot.
Although some parents are right about the idea of making their children better prepared for behaving well in grades, learning, hobbies and advantages, in all, a better life in the future, I think children should experience and enjoy their life more at the appropriate age, instead of those above.
In my opinion, it is important for children to take in enough nutrition from the experience of life. I believe it is better if children experience life more, so that they could be better prepared when facing challenges of life in the future, for life itself is more than learning in classes, and learning to live is rather fundermental and essential than learning in classes.Perhaps parents could choose other forms of after-school classes, such as doing housework with their children or taking vacations together to touch nature.Of course there are a great many more choices if you wish. If children get participated in these activities more and more, they will learn more and more. Learn from life, learn in life, and learn for life.

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补充一下，结尾写上：
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当然，书信的结尾落款不是只有这一种写法，楼主可按需选择

Answer 2

Dear XX，

I don't really agree with the after-school class thing because this kind of class is kind of useless and lack of effiency. Although some parents are right about letting children have more time in study will help they gain better score, I think children should have more chances to make their own choices. Parents should set the certain road for their children. In my opinion, if a student himself or herself wants to learn more after class, its good for him/her to take the after-school class. But if that not the case, then I don't think after-school class well be of great help.

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