Question

英文改错...

Dear Heidi,
What do you think? I'm actually writing a letter! I've got so used 1._____
to e-mails that my writing skills is getting rusty, so that I'd 2.____
to practice on you. 3.____
Actuaily, I've got a Iot to about after 10 weeks at university. 4.___
As you know,l decided to go to university in Hong Kong, most 5.____
because my family needs me in here. But in every other way my 6.___
lifestyle and surroundings have been changed dramatically. 7.___
In your last e-mail you asked me university life was very different from 8.__
secondary school life. Well,it ist in so many' ways! For the one thing, when 9.__
you go to university you join a whole community anci you are live, learn 10.__
and have fun within it. You don't just go to home when the school bell 11.___
rings and leave your friends behind. I share room in one ofthe residential 12.__
hall with a very nice girl, Kim, from Singapore. Kim and I get on really well. 13.__
We do difference subjects - she's a law student and I'm in cognitive 14.___
science - but we share all our new experiences and occasionally worries. 15.__
We enjoy doing a wide scope ofnew things over here. I'vejoin lots of 16.__
societies and clubs to find out they are all about. I won't have time 17.___
to keep up. with them all, but I think it's a good idea to try as many as 18.__
I can. For examples, I've never tried rowing before, but I find it very 19.___
enjoyable, a good way to meet other peoples and an excellent exercise. 20.__
I suppose the biggest change is that you have lot of freedom suddenly. 21.___
No one makes you to get up in the moming and go to bed at a reasonable 22.__
time at night. Lectures aren't compulsory, though you must handed in 23.___
your assignments on time. You also have to plan your works and leisure 24.__
time sensibly'. I certainly made few mistakes in my first weeks, 25.___
staying up too latc, try to do too much. I'm learning to use my 26.___
freedom proper. We all have to grow up sorr.e time, don't we'? 27.__
Wow! Doesn't that sound like your father or mother talking! 28.___
Actually, university life is great fun and I very love my course - 29.__
Jt's all so fascinating, 30.__
Perhaps you'll join me here in next year. Bye for now. 31.____
Love.

Answer 1

What do you think?
----应该是要加 of sth 的

I've got so used to e-mails that my writing skills is getting rusty, so that I'd to practice on you.
------- is 不清楚要不要变成 are
-------- on 变成with

I've got a Iot to about after 10 weeks at university.
--------- 少了动词 比如 a lot to talk about

As you know,l decided to go to university in Hong Kong, most because my family needs me in here
------I have decided
------ most--->mostly

But in every other way my lifestyle and surroundings have been changed dramatically.
---------- every other way 是想表达什么意思啊`? 也许变成 other ways 不太确定
-------------- have been 变成 have changed 这个不太确定 不过应该不会是被动

In your last e-mail you asked me university life was very different from secondary school life.
--------- asked me sth was 变成 asked me whether ...was

Well,it ist in so many' ways!
(ist 打错了 应该是 isn't)---------- 很直译` 大概` 把 in so many' ways! 变成... 呃` 还是整句改成 there aren't so many difference

For the one thing, when you go to university you join a whole community anci you are live, learn and have fun within it. (anci是什么`?注意错别字)
----------For .. 那里没有the
------------you are live 去掉are
----------- 应该不能用within`` 大概用 in吧``

You don't just go to home when the school bell rings and leave your friends behind
-------- go home 没有to
--------- 觉得` 变成and leave your friends behind when the school bell rings 比较好吧``

Kim and I get on really well.
-------- 不知道后面要不要加 with each other

We do difference subjects
---------应该是 have 不是 do

she's a law student
---------好像不能这样用 law 要变成形容词 或是 a student of law 之类的吧``` 不太确定这个改法

(中间这段`` 不确定是否正确)

I'vejoin lots of societies and clubs to find out they are all about.
----------- find out what they are all about.

I won't have time to keep up.
---------- 应该是 dont 不是wont

with them all,
-----------应该是接着上个句子 keep up 而不是连后面的` 改成 with all of them

For examples, I've never tried rowing before, but I find it very enjoyable, a good way to meet other peoples and an excellent exercise.
--------For examples 不要s
----------find 不知道要不要改成 found
---------- a good way to .. 前面加 it's
------- other people 不用s(本身就是复数)

I suppose the biggest change is that you have lot of freedom suddenly.
--------- 用lot of 要不是 a lot of 要不是 lots of(加可数)
------- suddenly ``变成 all at a sudden 吧`

No one makes you to get up in the moming and go to bed at a reasonable time at night. (moming 应该是morning)
-------- make sb do sth 没有 to do的
--------觉得 at a reasonable time 很奇怪`` 可以说 at a certain time 不太确定这个

I certainly made few mistakes in my first weeks, staying up too latc, try to do too much.
--------- have made
-------- 都说是first 就不能加s ---> week
-------- 不能直接加 例子 要个词 比如 such as 中间要不要加其他连词不太清楚

I'm learning to use my freedom proper.
------ 后面要加副词,改成properly
-------- 应该不能用 freedom 这个词` 可以说 freetime 之类的 freedom 就像是相对于监狱里的没自由``

We all have to grow up sorr.e time, don't we'?
-------- 中间那个` 我把它理解成 sooner a time`但这个不知道行不行. 觉得` sooner or later 可以用在这里

Doesn't that sound like your father or mother talking!
---------- 可以直接说 sound 立刻 your... .不用加 talking

Jt's all so fascinating,
-------- 变成复数 they're

Perhaps you'll join me here in next year.
--------- 直接加 next year 不用 in

好像找的过多了`` 不过真是好多错误啊`` 也许一句算是一个错误吧`

Answer 2

1.What->How
2.skills->skill
3.√
4.Actuaily->Actually to^+do
5.most->mostly
6.here->there
7.去掉been
8.asked->told
9.去掉the
10.live->alive
11.去掉to
12.in->in the
13.√
14.difference->different
15.occasionally->occasional
16.join->joined
17.out->out what
18.many->best
19.examples->example
20.peoples->people
21.lot->lots
22.去掉第一个to
23.though->but
24.works->work
25.few->a few
26.staying->stay
27.proper->properly
28.or->and
29.course->courses
30.It's->They're
31.去掉in