Question

高分求英语作文

我想要一篇大一学生写出的深度的电子邮件模式的写对网购的看法，关于网购是利是蔽的，想法的作文，字数在100字左右！若是您认真作答我可追加分数！谢谢您的认真回答~~~谢谢
深度不要太深！因为我们是要把作文以电子邮件的模式发给老师，所以要电子邮件的模式！字数在100字！谢谢

Answer 1

Dear 老师名字，
i wish to make clear in this email how my opinion towards the topic is. Online shopping brings more advantages than problems.
I want to begin with the fact that online-purchasing is much more convenient than buying in a conventional way. With a simple click we can almost get everything we want.
Apart from that, thing that can be bought on the internet are usually a much cheaper version of the real ones. With the new concept of group shopping, we even get access to prices that are too good to imagine.
Every coin has two sides, e-shopping certainly has some problem due to its immaturity. It can be unsafe. Even though, it's still fair to say that online shopping benefits us in a diverse way. It brings more merits than disadvantages.
Thank you for reading

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