Question

短文改错。

one day , I have to walk to the store. My little brother and his firends had come with me。While i was walking i had seen a group of kids sat on a step. When they had seen us walk around the corners, they got up and left in the front of the store.When i had reached the step i spotted a pink cell phone.I looked it and saw one of the girls that was sitting on the step looking for anything .I picked it up,walked towards him and asked,"is this yours?"She replied with a sigh,"yes !thank you!"Isimple said,"no problem,just paid it forward!"She smiled and walked away happily.
高中英语，急求帮忙！！

Answer 1

　　（二）立意要专一
　　“作文之事,贵于专一,专则生巧,散乃人愚.”无论多么复杂的事情,主旨不能分散.一篇文章如果既想说明这个问题,又想阐述那个观点,东拉西扯,必然立意不明确.其实,想面面俱到肯定会面面 不到位,况且一篇文章只能有一个中心,与其“贪多嚼不烂”,不如集中笔墨表现一个中心,即使是通过数件事来表现中心,也要做到紧帖中心行文,目标始终如一,着墨于材料与中心的结合点,使材料蕴涵的力量全部直指中心.
　　（三）立意要新颖
　　文章最忌随人后,人云亦云,新颖的角度是作文创新的核心.立意新颖要求跳出陈旧的框框、不按顺向思维、习惯思维或原有的心理定式进行立意构思,而是以独到的视角去审视题目中所蕴涵的另类内容,避开他人所常写,写别人所未写.即使同一写作对象,总是可以从许多角度切入,只要我们打破思维的定式,站