Question

商务邮件中译英（关于薪资），帮忙看看翻译的英文对不对，谢谢。

Dear ***,
有如下几件事情需要你这里配合，
Please help me to finish the things below:
1. 请从11月份开始按照国家规定，社保部分还是进分到角吧，谢谢。

1. According to the Government Rule, the social insurance should be calculated to one decimal. Please follow it from Nov.
2. 请在提供我们的报表中增加二列，分别为“加班费/其他补贴”及“税后扣除列”
2. Add two row in the form which you provide us, one is “overtime pay/other subsidy”, the other is“deduct after tax”
另，附件是11月份工资需要调整的明细，请查阅。
By the way, I have included the adjustment list about the Nov payroll in the attachment.
因本月是我第一次负责薪资，所以希望你这里能尽快提供我11月份的薪资表，以便我核对，希望能告知我大概可以提供的时间，谢谢。
It’s my first time to responsible for the payroll, I wish you can provide me the final payroll form ASAP. Then I can have enough time to confirm it. I look forward to hearing the reply from you.

中文是邮件想要表达的意思，我想发给帮我们做薪资的劳务公司的人，英文是我自己翻译的，麻烦高手帮忙看看准确么，谢谢了。

Answer 1

Dear ***:
For a few assignments,I kindly ask for your cooperation.
1, Under government regulations concerned,the socia insurance calculating is recommended to be done by one decimal.I expect your cooperation.
2 Please add two rows to the chart which you send us as follows:one is “overtime pay/other subsidy”, the other is“deduct after tax”
3 Note: the adjustment list about the Nov payroll has been included in the enclosure.
Since this is the first time that I take charge of the payroll,it is my desire that you send me the final payroll form ASAP as soon as possible so that I can have enough time to check up every detail of it. I look forward to hearing the reply from you.

Answer 2

1.please follow it可以改成please adjust it.
2.two rows（复数）
Add two rows named/called XX and XX这样子比较简便
3.Please refer to the attachment about the ...on Nov.(因为你的Nov是缩写所以一定要加“.”哦）
4.For this is my first time to be in charge of the payroll,I hope you can provide the final payroll for me from ASAP as soon as possible so that I can confirm it on convenience. Additionally,please tell me the time that you can provide.I'm looking forward to your reply.

Answer 3

麻烦配合 可以说please help me with the following things
需要调整的明细 可说：the breakdown of paycheck in Nov.that acquires adjustment
最后一句：i would like to have u provide me the payroll in Nov. ASAP due to my first execution, so that i could check it on time. and please inform me of the possible time u need to prepare, thank you.

Answer 4

Starting from November in accordance with state regulations, social security or some of it into the corner assigned, thank you. Please provide us with the addition of two statements, namely, "Overtime / Other subsidies" and "after-tax net out" the other, the attachment is in November need to be adjusted salary details, please refer to. This month is my first time responsible for the salary, so I hope you provide here as soon as possible my 11 month salary scale, so that I check, hoping this time I think I can provide, thank you.