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(好的30分)看下这篇英语作文，有语法错误请指出并改正，谢谢

看下这篇英语作文，有语法错误请指出并改正，谢谢
再提一些意见，再次感谢
I like reading the books about computers. I have read many different kinds of books. Some are about knowledge of computers（原意想指“应用知识类书籍”）and others are about programming. I like reading them because they are useful to me. Reading these books makes me play the computer well. And I also read some magazines about computers. I can get many news from the magazines. I learn more things from the books. So, I think that reading books is good for us.

Answer 1

第一句books前的The要去掉。
倒数第二行的news最好用informations。还有那 from后的The,该城these.
I learn 后为什么用more?和谁比较的？为什么不用many ，a lot of .pretty much 或者abundance of.....
不知道你什么水平？但是我不得不说这是一篇写得很烂的作文。读起来一点感觉都没有，像在看一个3岁的小娃娃学说话....