Question

雅思写作大作文高分范文：如何解决青少年犯罪问题

Answer 1

Nowadays, an ever-INCREASING rate of juvenile delinquency has attracted widespread attention. Youth, variety and high-tech are marked indications of this crime. In the following discussion, I will analyse its reasons and propose my solutions.
As far as I am concerned, there are an array of complicated factors attributed to such phenomenon. First and foremost, excessive media such as Internet ,TV and films are to blame for getting our children access to the bloodY and violent contents. Lacking capacity to distinguish good and evil, they are more likely to imitate the violence and various crimes exposed to them(,) without a recognition that they will regret in the future. Another considerable reason should be mentioned is that teachers and parents only focus on the youth's academic results rather than their interest and psychological problems. As we always give priority to exam scores, those who (cannot) perform well tend to get TOO frustrated to study and take a hostile attitude toWARD ALL OF society. Some of them even commit a crime as a revenge to society when they are /always/FOREVER BEING/ criticized by their teachers and parents.
Considering some of them being in contravention of rules and laws unconsciously, we should not press a charge on them simply or they will stray from right path again in the future. A ""Special care ""DEpartment should be set up in order to enable them to pick up their optimism toWARD the world(,) and their own goals in their lives.With appropriate guidance, they can learn job skills and useful knowledge. Most importantly, effective plans should be implemented to accelerate the reform of education and augment stern supervision on media.
To conclude, we are confronted with an EVER-increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.
To conclude, we are confronted with an increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.