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帮我看看我的作文有哪些问题吗？

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Answer 1

Yesterday we held a conversation about “do you think whether we should have zoos”. I think we shouldn’t have zoos. Because animals are sad to live in the zoos. They can’t go back home. And sometimes they can’t get enough food. What’s more, workers and visitors there even hurt them. What can we do to protect animals better? I think we should protect the environment, like stopping cutting down trees or polluting the air. We should give animals safe living habitats, enough food and clean water. One thing more, please remember: when the buying stops, the killing can too! So don’t buy things made of animals is also important.

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