Question

英语老师，帮我看看这篇作文能有多少分？我的高考作文，背出来的

I am li hua. This summer holiday， I study in London. I write this letter in order to do a Volunteer in drawing room. As is often the case, I read Chinese history book and help other people on a daily basis. A case in point is that When my classmates ask me about history, I also tell them. Because help other people let me happy.
And I like drawing too. Nothing is more important than the fact that drawing room invite volunteer that like help other people and like drawing. With the development of times,more and more students like Chinese picture. I come from china, so I feel very happy.
If I do a volunteer, I will tell human beings whom Go to the drawing room About drawing . In my point of view, it would be better if Do a volunteer. I will conclude by saying best wishes to you.

Answer 1

按高考打的话保守估计17分左右吧，句子还是有些低级错误 像book没有加s有些句子不怎么有逻辑我觉得，而且原因状语从句找不到主句 就单独的because和and是非常不讨喜的那个picture也没有加s do a volunteer好像不是常用短语吧？？
我不是英语老师 但是作为高一学生出这些错误会让我们老师骂死在那里 但是高考有很多不确定因素 说不定老师看到了你的亮点没看到缺点呢 考完就别想那么多了 好好放松一下吧

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我这个作文有什么亮点呢？

Answer 2

十分制，6-8分吧