the summer holiday when

高中英语改错Thesummerholiday,whenI'mlookingforwardto,iscoming.Whatafunitistogoswimming!Play... 高中英语改错
The summer holiday,when I'm looking forward to,is coming.What a fun it isto go swimming!Playing football is one of my hobby.I can ride my bicycle,climb highmountains or go fishing.Sometime I can play chess with my grandfather.Howinterested my holiday will be!But my father is always afraid I would be hurt by a truck,fall into water,fell off a tree or something.He is afraid I would fright against others or be taken by bad people.And if I'm careful and politely enough,how will these things happen?I must try my best to persuade my father.
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when改为which
what a fun中去掉a
hobby改为hobbies
or改为and
sometime改为sometimes
interested改为interesting
fell改为fall
something后加else
And改为But
politely改为polite
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