Question

请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误。

You used to study really hard.And got grades pretty good.You had many great ways to study,such as making card, listening to tapes,asking teacher for help,study with a group.At present,You are changed.You don't do homework anymore.You would rather play computer games than read interesting books. I think playing computer is bad for your health,and it could make you get tired.What can you do to realx yourself?Ithink you can taking a walk in a park,going to a concert or a museum.
15分会扣掉几分？ You had many great ways to study， such as making card, listening

额，老天，低年级那。初中水平差不多。

Answer 1

第二行：study换成studying（such as+doing）
第二行：You are changed——你被改变，不太合适。应为自己主姿薯行动改变，改为You change
第五行：can taking改为can take，going to a concert 改为 go to a concert (can后面加一般现在时）
这要看评分标准了，还有改卷的严迹哗格程度
初手团中，那还不错哦，应该扣3、4分左右。

Answer 2

至于错误，楼上已经解答了！不过我说说对你的作文的看法
1。你的作文读起来没有一点连贯性！逻辑顺旦历序太差！.
2。没有文采，好的词汇和短语没有几个！最严重的携春是全是简单句，连接上很差！
当然我不知道你辩迟耐念几年级，如果是初学者，那么已经足够了！以后写得多了就好了！但如果是高年级的，那么我就实在不敢恭维啦！
如果我是老师，最多给一半分！

Answer 3

第一行: and 理论上不能做句首词的,你这句打了前面哪亏启打了句空迹号那就是没主语.and前面打分号可以
第二行: listening to tapes, >listen to tapes.
第三行: dont > didn't
嗯 ,,第六行,can +take... 情态动词后面李如加动词原型