Question

急！英语短文改错，有10处错误！

I've been to china for two years.My friends in English sometime write to me,ask me how long I'll Stay here,and when I'm thinking returning home. The answer of their questions is simple；I do not Know when I will return home. At the moment, I have no reason to return England. I like living in China；I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel around the country. My work is very interested, and there have so many things I don't know about China that I hope to discover in the future.
第二句的english本来是england，是我打错了…恩，是改错题…不是作文…

Answer 1

1.I've been to china for two years:i've been to 是一个非持续性短语，你不可以说“我曾经到过中国”这个状态持续两年.I've been in China for two years.我在中国待了两年了.
2.My friends in English sometime write to me: 我在英国的朋友有时候写信给我，in England;sometimes
3.ask me how long I'll Stay here. 省略主语时需用动名词开始asking
4.I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel around ：traveling，同meeting一样为并列现在分词
5.My work is very interested：interesting,物做主语需要用词形容词
6.and there have so many things I don't know about:there be句型...不解释
7.and when I'm thinking returning home:现在来说这一句，唉...楼主是想说“并且问我现在想什么时候回英国”吧？and when to return home in my opinion now.
8.The answer of their questions: the answer for their questions

最后冒昧的说问一句，楼主恐怕是初中生要写作文吧？完全是中国式英语语法...唉，我都改不下去了。建议多读读新概念英语哦！

Answer 2

改正在括号处标出，总共十处错误！

I've been (in) China for two years. My friends in England (sometimes) write to me, (asking) me how long I'll stay here, and when I'm thinking (加入of/about) returning home. The answer (to) their questions is simple；I do not know when I will return home. At the moment, I have no reason to return (加入to) England. I like living in China；I enjoy meeting Chinese people and (traveling/travelling) around the country. My work is very (interesting), and there (are) so many things I don't know about China (as) I hope to discover in the future.

注：/ 表示可以任意选用其一。

Answer 3

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I've stayed in China for two years.My friends in England sometimes write to me,asking me how long I'll stay here and when to return home.The answers to their questions are simple:I don't know when I'll return home.At the moment,I have no reason to return to England.I like living in China.Also I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travelling around the country.My work is very interesting,and there are so many things that I don't know about China which makes me hope to discover in the future.