Question

请哪位英语高手帮我翻译中的找下错误，多谢多谢

1. 自从he大学毕业以后，他就一直在从事(to be engaged in)社会活动。
After graducated from university,he has been engaging in taking part in social activities.
2. 一到北京，这对European couple就被他们随处所见(everywhere)的现代化景象(scene) 惊呆了.
On arriving in Beijing ,the European couple were shocked by the modern scene in everywhere.
3. 在晚会上，直到Mary走过来找我说话时我才注意到（be aware of） 她也在场。
Not until mary came to talk with me ,did I be aware of her presence in the evening party.
4. Unfortunately, 我没赶上火车。当我急急忙忙赶到月台(platform)时，火车已徐徐开动了(pull out).
Unfortunately ,when I hurried to the platform,the train had been pulled out slowly,I haven’t caught it.
5. 在回家的路上，我被交通阻塞困在(get caught in) 路上。
On my way home, I got caught in the midway as a result of car jam.
6. The old couple 20 年前就梦想（dream of）能爬上长城，20年后的今天他们在雨中实现了自己的夙愿。
The old couple was dreamed of climbing the Great Wall twenty years ago,today they realized their long-cherished desire in the rain.
7. 我处理（get through with）完这一大堆文件后就给你打电话。
On my getting through with the large number of files,I ‘ll give you a phone call.
8. 我们一定（must）要把文件锁好（keep sth. done）.
We must keep the documents locked.
9. 他们给了他机会参加（take part in）新产品的设计（design）工作。
They gave him the opportunity to take part in the work which relate to new products’ design.
10. Howard 的头发开始变得（turn）花白。
Howard’s hair began to turn white.

Answer 1

After graduating from university, he has been engaging in social activities. 楼主拼写错误，修饰语时态错误，重复多余动词。
On arriving in Beijing, the European couple was shocked by the modern scene everywhere. 楼主主语动词不配，couple属单数，in everywhere表达错误。
It was not until Mary came to talk with me, did I become aware of presence in the evening party. 介词，动词不当。
Unfortunately, when I hurried to the platform, the train was already pulling out, I didn't catch the train. 句子时态一致，一般过去式。
On my way home, I got caught in a traffic jam midway. 动词时配traffic jam.
The old couple dreamed of climbing the Great Wall twenty years ago. Today, they realized their long-cherished desire in the rain. 动词错误，句子分段错误。
I will give you a phone call after I get through with the many files. 全句整改
We must keep the documents locked up. 要加介词，固定搭配。
They gave him the opportunity to take part designing the new products. 删改使简洁。
最后一句对了。

Answer 2

单词 都写错了