Question

一篇关于朋友的英语作文，谁能帮忙改一下，谢了

Friends are very important to us in our life.Everyone needs some good .A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
Do you want to know my best friend? We met during our frist year in primary school.She is a girl who has big black eyes .She is also clever and kind .一次？，our school had a 400-meter-ran test. My PE was not very good .I wanted give up .She tried her best to help me and always practiced with me.使我通过了考试?Until we finished our school we studied znd played together all the tine.
Now we both have new friends .However, we will remember each other forever.

Answer 1

Friends are very impertant to us in our life. Everyone needs a confidant when they need help. A life without friends is like a plant without any sunshine.
Do you want to know about my best friend? We met in our first year in primay school. She is a girl who has beautiful black eyes. She is also very kind, and sometimes clever. Once, we had a 400-meter-track-race test at school. However, my physical education skills are not very impressive, and I wanted to give up. Then she tried her best to persuade me not to give up, and used alot of her leisure time to practice with me, so it made me pass the 400-meter-track-race test. From that time, we always finish our work and play together after school.
Now, even though we both met alot of new friends, but we will remember each other (as long as we can/forever).
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Answer 2

Friends are very important to us in our life. Everyone needs some good friends. A life without a friend is like one without sun.
Do you want to know my best friend? We met in the first year of primary school. She is a girl with big black eyes. She is also smart and kind. Once our school had a 400-meter-running test. My PE was not very good. I wanted to give up. She tried her best to help me and practiced with me, and I passed the test. We studied and played together all the time until we finished school.
Now we both have new friends, yet I think we will remember each other forever.

Answer 3

Friends are very important for us in our life.Everyone needs some good friends.A person does not have a friend just like life without a sun.
Do you want to know my best friend?We met during our first year in primary school. She is a girl who has big black eyes. She also is a clever and kind students. Once,our school had a 400-meter-race.My PE Was not very well. I want to give up.She tried her best to help me and pricticed with me. Ipassed the test in the end.All the time,we studied and played together.
Now both have new friends. However,we will remember each other forever.