英语--改错
Hehastakenhonorscoursesthroughouthistenureathissuburbanhighschool,hasalreadyqualified...
He has taken honors courses throughout his tenure at his suburban high school, has already qualified for advance placement in two subjects and expercts to qualify for several others.
请问这句话哪一个地方错了?怎么改?
PS: honors是正确的,意为"优等成绩".... 展开
请问这句话哪一个地方错了?怎么改?
PS: honors是正确的,意为"优等成绩".... 展开
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这句话的问题在前面半句，这种题首先分析句子结构，按照句子的意思，很明显主句是后半句，有两个并列的谓语has already qualified和expercts。既然一个句子中已有了谓语，那前半句中的结构肯定不对，前半句只能作为整个句子的主语。应把前面那句话改成独立主格结构，句子结构才正确。
应该把He has taken改为his taking。
应该把He has taken改为his taking。
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He has taken honors courses throughout high school, has already qualified for advanced placement in two subjects, and expects to qualify for several others.
"his tenure at his suburban" 太罗嗦。"tenure" 一般用于高等教育，用于高中课程不合适。
"advance placement" AP 的正确整写是advanced placement.
“expercts' 正确拼写是 expects
"his tenure at his suburban" 太罗嗦。"tenure" 一般用于高等教育，用于高中课程不合适。
"advance placement" AP 的正确整写是advanced placement.
“expercts' 正确拼写是 expects
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