Question

求英语高手帮忙改写下下面的2段句子

1.she can inform the senior executive how the system is progressing and whether any changes need to be made.
2.the Performance Appraisal's will be linked to salary reviews and promotions. The results will be examined before salary increases and promotions are confirmed, but this will not happen for the next review which is going to be held this month, January.

我的意思是用英语改成同义句只需要意思一样就好了 ，求高手

请看清楚用英语改额 跪求高手给力the Performance Appraisal's will be linked to salary reviews and promotions. The results will be examined before salary increases and promotions are confirmed到这里就可以结束了
其实后面句主要是前半句

Answer 1

She can（is able to 更好，代表她有这能力） (can代表她能，她可以，如果要表达，她的职责是，那么用are supposed to 或是she should) inform the senior executive how the system progresses.(用一般时更好）

the Performance Appraisal's will be linked to salary reviews and promotions. The results will be issued before salary increases and promotions are confirmed. But the Performance Appraisal won't be carried out for the next salary review which is to be held this month. （我不懂这里你是说薪水审查要这个月吗？你最好把中文给一下，我可以给你翻翻。）

Answer 2

1.she can inform the senior executive how the system is progressing and whether any changes need to be made.

1.She is expected to inform the senior executive how the system is progressing and whether any changes are needed.

2.the Performance Appraisal's will be linked to salary reviews and promotions. The results will be examined before salary increases and promotions are confirmed, but this will not happen for the next review which is going to be held this month, January.

2.The salary review and promotion will be tied to the performance appraisal. The appraisal result will be examined first before salary increase and promotion are determined. But your appraisal won't be conducted for the coming review that is going to be held this month, January 2011.

Answer 3

1.她可以告诉高级主管如何制度在进展，是否什么变动需要使。
2.绩效考核的将链接薪水评论和提升。结果将审查之前加薪，提升被确认，然而这个将不发生为未来评论将——举行本月，一月。绩效考核的将链接薪水评论和提升。结果将审查前加薪，提升被确认

Answer 4

1。她可告知高级管理人员系统是怎样进步的，以及还有什么地方需要改动。
2。业绩考核将与薪水审核和升职挂钩。成绩会在涨工资和实现升职之前审核，但在这个月，即一月举行的下一次复审中不会发生。

Answer 5

她的高级行政人员可以通知系统的进展如何，以及是否需要作出改变。

企业绩效评价的将与薪酬检讨和促销活动。将检查结果之前，加薪和晋升得到证实，但这种情况不会发生在未来的检讨，将是本月底举行，一月。