Question

高中英语改错(共10处错误）

LiHua,a Senior Three student,isvery busy with his lessons in every day.Last Saturday,as usual,he went to weekend class.In the evening,he studied at home until deeply into the night.He was very sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively.On Sunday morning,Li Hua was about to study then his father came up and advise him to have a rest.Soon they had a good idea.They made kite and then the family went to the suburbs.Li Hua enjoyed him.The family had a picnic together,relax in the open air.On Monday,Li Hua was energetic and active in class.He said it was only because he had good weekend.

Answer 1

去掉in
deeply--deep
very--so
then--when
advise--advised
kite--kites/a kite
suburbs--suburb

him--himself
relax--relaxing
had--had a

追问

relax不应该改成relaxed表示人很放松吗？