Question

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During last summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it, did I realized that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep.
This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this forgettable experience. Not only was it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but I also learned to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

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During last summer holiday, I found (加入a) part-time job, (worked改成working) in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I (realized改成realize) that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. (On改成In) the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came (去掉to) home to sleep.
This backward schedule was (very改成so) tough for me that I often felt (tiring改成tired). But I am glad that I had this (forgettable改成unforgettable) experience. Not only was it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon (or改成and) stars, but I also learned to appreciate the hard work of those (which改成who) are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

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Answer 2

This morning, my foreign teacher Robert and I went to the park by taxi. On 【1.seen改成seeing】 the beautiful trees and flowers, Robert couldn't wait to take pictur. It was at the moment 【2.when改成that 】we found his camera gone. He searched all over his bag but just couldn't find 【3.one改成it】. Suddently it came to me 【4.加上that】he might have left it in the taxi. 【5.lucky改成luckily】, we found【6. 去掉out 】the ticket and immediately got【7. in改成to 】the taxi company.About half an hour【8. late改成later】 ,the dirver returned with the camera. Both of us were grateful 【9.for改成to 】the driver.Rober and I 【10.enjoy改成enjoyed】 ourselves during the rest of the day 。
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