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1.句子成分残缺不全 We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误) We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正) We should read books may be useful to us. (误) We should read books which may be useful to us. (正) 2.句子成分多余 This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误) One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正) The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误) The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正) 3.主谓斗冲不一致 Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误) Some think that reading should be selective. (正) 1/3页 My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误) My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正) 4.动词时态、语态配橡的误用 I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误培销旁) I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
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你好,
首先,第喊春闭一句没有什么问题,只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“郑裂Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”,不过意思差不太多,我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧,有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成森缺“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥,你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”?“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了!我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站,还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下,可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下,谢谢!
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我第一段想说“尽管小女孩很累,但是景色确实非常棒”
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We are always fvcking girls' B.
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