Question

英语改错~急~

1。he was felt very pleased and decided to attend it,
2.what a lot businessman.
3.the people, who were invited to the conference, came from the United States, Italy, France, Singapore,Japan, HongKong included some provinces of China.
4.before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English.
5.It doesn't cost many to camp, and what I believe it's the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.
6. every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted,"Shut it off, It's awful!"

怎么改，为什么，请详解，谢谢！
为什么大家都不解释，为什么要那么改？

Answer 1

1.删掉was was系be动词为被动语态，不合适 语义不通
2.lot后加of a lot of 为惯用法
3.included改为including included意思为 包括的 形容词性，including意思为 包括 为介词，结构符合
4.not改为no 此为语感...太简单，反而不会解释...一般not用于句尾吧
5.去掉and 连词重复了 一般句中可和and连用
6.shouted改为shouts 一般现在时单数第三人称...
帮忙评最佳，谢谢

Answer 2

1.删掉was
2.lot后加of
3.included改为including
4.not改为no
5.删掉and
6.shouted改为shouts
如果可以的话，请帮忙评一个最佳答案，谢谢！

Answer 3

1,He felt very pleased and decided to attend it.
2,what lot a bussinessman
3,the people, who were invited to the conference, came from the United States, Italy, France, Singapore,Japan, HongKong including some provinces of China.
4,.before you came to teach us, I was not interest in English
5,.It doesn't cost many to camp, and what I believe it's the best way to get close to nature and enjoy its beauty.
6,every time my father finds me listening to rock music, he always shouts,"Shut it off, It's awful!"