Question

请帮我看看这篇英语文章有没有语法错误 谢谢 急

Wing is one of my best friends who are very smart and stylish girl. We met in our high school where we have spent our happy hour there. However, she is the most knowledgeable person that I’ve ever known. No matter what I ask, she can always find a perfect answer in her brilliant brain. Wing is also very kind. She’s used to taking care of some dogs whose legs are badly hurt. What’s more she is also very multi-talent. For example, she is good at dancing and playing the base. Because both of us are music fans, we have a band .She is the base player and I’m the guitar player. We used to perform in our school party, which is really exciting. Although we’re in different school now , we also call each other twice a week to maintain our friendship.

Answer 1

Wing is one of my best friends who are very smart and stylish girl.
are 改成is ,添上a / / 或者girl改成girls(如果是一篇改错，就按规矩来，一行一个错)

We met in our high school where we have spent our happy hour there.
met 改成meet ，hour改成hours
However, she is the most knowledgeable person that I’ve ever known.
However改成Moreover，没有转折

What’s more she is also very multi-talent. .
multi-talent改成multi-talented

Because both of us are music fans, we have a band .
have表示拥有，还是form正式点（成立乐队）

We used to perform in our school party, which is really exciting.
既然是过去常常，那么party改成parties.
which is really exciting个人觉得很不错啊。is既不用改are也不用改was，因为which可以指代前面整个句子（即过去经常在学校派对上表演这件事情），is really exciting指过去这件事情现在（is）回味依旧令人兴奋。

Although we’re in different school now , we also call each other twice a week to maintain our friendship.去掉also，不然太中式英语了，不需要强调“尽管...，但是...”这个中文表达式。

谢谢观赏

Answer 2

she's used to take care of

Answer 3

We used to perform in our school party 应该是paties吧
Although we’re in different school now , 是schools吧
what's more后加逗号
which is really exciting中 is最好为was

Answer 4

who is a very smart
we met in high school就可以了
where we spent our happy time together
最好不要用however，怪怪的
没有multi-talent.可以用she has lots of accomplishments表示多才多艺
play the bass.
which was realling exciting
different schools
最后一句最好改成because。。。we call each other...