Question

英语作文修改：The Persons I look up to

The Persons I look up to
My father is the man I respect most. Stern as he may be, he never fails to show his care and consideration.

Once I broke a neighbor's window. Seeing nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad came home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what had happened.　　I could only tell him the truth. Rather than scold me, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor. I learned from this episode that not only does Dad take care of our health but he also teaches us how to be good citizens.

How lucky I am to have such a good father!
请各位帮忙修改此文，要求如下：
用定语从句
初二水平
尽量不改变原文记叙的内容。
先给20分，满意加10分。
提高了10分的悬赏，满意照样加10分，拜托各位了，先谢过。

Answer 1

1）stern估计是你查字典查来的吧，你想说你父亲比较严格，用strict就可以。stern不恰当不太有人用了
2）rather than scolding me, 或者instead of scolding me
3）I learned from this experience 而不是episode