Question

一篇英语作文，今天就要呢~~~着急呢~~~拜托了...

主要内容就是和上个月（用过去式哦）和同学们一起出去野炊，我们做了烧烤非常好吃。这些就是介绍一下就可以啦，最主要的是要立意深刻，要表达出自己内心的感受（比如说同学的互相帮助、同学之间的团结，还有与同学友谊的珍贵...）最主要的就是这些啦，大概二百字左右吧~~~语法可千万别有错误...帮帮忙吧~~~初二至初三水平....

Answer 1

Last month I went for a picnic with my fellow classmates, and the barbequed food we made was mouth-watering and delicious. We helped one another with carrying the boxes of utensils and barbeque grills, and I really admired my class' teamwork, as everything would be done much slower had we not offered to help one another. When we played games, we did not bother about winning or losing; everyone seemed to understand the objective of the games, which was to strengthen the bond between us. For example when we were walking on a tight rope, my fellow classmates acted selflessly, and made sure that no one was left behind before proceeding with the challenge. It was as if we treasured one another more than winning the race and experiencing that short-term pride glowing in our chests. Because of our team spirits, everyone won the race, as the teacher-in-charge announced, and I really wish to have another of this sort of outing to bond our class together even more. If only I had such classmates in every school I went to, it would be heaven for me. Through this experience I saw the contrast between their normal selves and when they play. Especially those who usually work very hard when exams are round the corner; they were the ones who cheered the loudest this outing.

Answer 2

5.Last summer vacation, I visited Beijing with my parents,The weather was fine but a little hot.We visitded the Palace Museum,the Great Wall,,Tian'an Men Square and a Beijing hutong,they are all so great and beaitiful.And i enjoyed lots of delicious and cheap food during the days.We also went shopping .My parents bought some beautiful clothes for me.I had a good time there.

6. Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner. The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.

7.Last summer, I went to a village that was far away from our city. My parents and I went there to visit my uncle.I found it a beautiful place to live. The water was clean in the river, birds were singing in the trees, farmers were working hard in the field, and the moon at night was whiter than that in our town. The village was so nice that I didn't want to come back!
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Answer 3

Last summer vacation, I visited Beijing with my parents,The weather was fine but a little hot.We visitded the Palace Museum,the Great Wall,,Tian'an Men Square and a Beijing hutong,they are all so great and beaitiful.And i enjoyed lots of delicious and cheap food during the days.We also went shopping .My parents bought some beautiful clothes for me.I had a good time there.

Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner. The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.

Last summer, I went to a village that was far away from our city. My parents and I went there to visit my uncle.I found it a beautiful place to live. The water was clean in the river, birds were singing in the trees, farmers were working hard in the field, and the moon at night was whiter than that in our town. The village was so nice that I didn't want to come back!
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