Question

哪位英语高手帮我把这个故事用英语说出来，是要说给人家听的 所以 语法和词语都要对。

很久很久以前，有一座山叫五指山，山脚下有个村，村里有个年轻的猎手年轻人，有一次上山打猎，山上一点动静也没有，年轻人觉得很奇怪，于是就在山上守着，等着等着，突然，在他面前跳出了一只小鹿，年轻人看到以后就追了上去，不知追了多久，终于追到了天涯海角，猎人见状急忙拿下弓箭准备向小鹿射去，就在这个时候小鹿回头了，猎人惊呆了，没有想到小鹿竟然是个美丽的仙女，于是放下弓箭准备回去，而仙女被年轻人的毅力所感动，于是就留在人间和年轻人在一起了，后来人们把这个地方叫做鹿回头！
第一段 “ 村里有个年轻的猎手年轻人 ” 年轻人不要 是要说个人家听的 所以要求 语法和词语都要对

Answer 1

A long long time ago, there was a mountain called Five Finger Mountain. On the foot of the mountain there was a village.In the village, there was a young hunter. One day when this young hunter went hunting in the mountain, he found that the mountain was strangely quiet. He was confused and thus decided to wait to see what had happened. He waited and waited. Then, suddenly, a little deer jumped out in front of him. He chased after the deer for a long time until they reached the edge of the world. He then held up his bow and was about to released his arrow. But at this moment, the deer turned her head back. The hunter was surprised because the deer was a beautiful fairy. He put down his bow and was about to leave. However, the fairy was touched by his insistence and so she stayed in the world with this young hunter.
Hereafter, this place is called "Deer turning back"

Answer 2

Long long ago, there was a mountain called wuzhishan, at the foot of the mountain have a village, the village there is a young hunter, once uphill hunting, mountain point nothing has happened, young people feel very oddness, then keep on the mountain, waiting to wait, suddenly, before him and jump out of a deer, young people see later will chase after go up, don't know how long, finally reached faraway places, the hunter looked at quickly scored bow ready to fawn shoot, at this time, the little deer turn-ing back the hunter startled, did not think of the fawn unexpectedly is a beautiful fairy, then down arrow, and ready to go back to fairy by young people of perseverance touched, hence stay in human and young people together, people later put this place called luhuitou!

Answer 3

Long long ago, there was a mountain called five finger mountain, there was a village at the foot of the mountain, and a young hunter lived here.
Once upon a time, the young man went up the mountain to hunt, but nothing was stirred on the mountain, the young man found it very strange, so he guarded here, waited and waited.
Suddenly, in front of him, a deer jumped out, the young man saw it and pursued after, after long time pursuing, and finally came to the ends of the earth, then the hunter quickly took down the bow and arrow and got ready to shot the deer, at that point, the deer turned around, the hunter was astonished, he did not think that the deer turned out to be a beautiful fairy, so he put down the bow and arrow and went back.
And the fairy was touched by the perseverance of the young man, so she stayed in the world and lived together with the young man, and later this place was called deer turning around by people!

Answer 4

Long long ago, there was a mountain called Five-finger Mountain. At the foot of the mountain there was a small village. In the village lived a young hunter.
Once the young hunter went hunting in the mountain, and it was so unusually quiet there that he felt very strange. He wanted to know what's going on, so he waited in the mountain. After waiting for a long time, suddenly a young deer came jumping in front of him. The young man immediately ran after it. Nobody knows how long he ran, but finally he trapped the deer into Ultima Thule, and was ready to shoot the deer with his bow and arrow.
Just at the time, the deer looked back and stunned the hunter. It was a beautiful fairy, not a deer. The young man dropped his bow and arrow, and began to leave. But the fairy was so moved by the young man's perseverance that she decided to stay in the earthly world with him.
After that, people named the place as Deer-Looking-Back.

Answer 5

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