Question

英语好的大神，求帮助，帮忙看看有没有语法错

求大神帮忙，急用啊！！！帮忙看看有没有语法错

Let me tell you something about me
Let me tell you something about me. To be exact, it's about my English. When I was a little girl, my mother liked to tell me some English stories. Such as 《Snow White》《 Alice in wonderland》《 Cinderella》and so on. From then on , I liked English. I wanted to speak English like my mother. But to me, this was unreachable. I was not so quiet at that time.learn after a period of time, I wasn't interested in it any more. As a little girl, I wanted to play most.
But my mother doesn't think so. she wanted me to go on studying English. She didn't have too much to force me. She just told me some English stories as before. Then she taught me some words. She gave each word a story. Little by little, I found that I loved English again. I would like to learn English. Year after year, maybe my English isn't so good, but I loved it. I believe that interest is the best teacher. Maybe I am not the best. But I'll try. I think I'll be better and better.

Answer 1

like 一般不用过去式 可以用 used to do表示过去的习惯现在不再做了
since then i began to like English begin不可延续动词 所以可以用过去式
I dreamed that my English was as good as that of my mother. want 同 like一般不用过去式
after having learnt....表示先后
she didn't force me too much 注意语序
she gave me each story give接双宾
love不用过去式 还可以用began
but i love it
总体内容蛮不错的，加油

Answer 2

learn after a period of time, I wasn't interested in it any more. 改成
learning after a period of time, I wasn't interested in it any more.

But my mother doesn't think so.改成
But my mother didn't think so.

She didn't have too much to force me. 改成
She didn't force me too much.

Answer 3

But my mother didn't think so