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ihavemanyfriends,andihaveonlyonegoodfriend.hernameiszhoufang.fangismyclosedfriendinou...
i have many friends,and i have only one good friend.her name is zhou fang.fang is my closed friend in our school,after class,we always take walk in the garden and talk about a lor of thing.we talk to the topics in the newspaper.some dfficulty math problems and so on.fang can even be my teather because of she often offers me good advice.we are very happy when they get together.friendship helps me grow and enjoying my life. we all need friends because friendship are wealth!
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closed---closest
take walk---take a walk
a lot of thing--a lot of thins
talk to--talk about
difficulty-difficult
because of- because
they get together- we get together
and enjoying- and enjoy
are wealth-is wealth
找到九处,因为一般十句话中有一句话是对的,如果非要十处的话,第一句and换成but
take walk---take a walk
a lot of thing--a lot of thins
talk to--talk about
difficulty-difficult
because of- because
they get together- we get together
and enjoying- and enjoy
are wealth-is wealth
找到九处,因为一般十句话中有一句话是对的,如果非要十处的话,第一句and换成but
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也改了其他错误:
I have manyfriends, and I have only one good friend. Her name is Zhou Fang. Fang is myclose friend in our school. After class, we always take a walk in the gardenand talk about a lot of things. We talk about the topics in the newspapers, difficultiesin maths’ problems and so on. Fang can even be my teacher because she often offersme good advices. We are very happy when we are together. Friendship helps megrow up and I am enjoying my life. We all need friends because friendships arewealth!
I have manyfriends, and I have only one good friend. Her name is Zhou Fang. Fang is myclose friend in our school. After class, we always take a walk in the gardenand talk about a lot of things. We talk about the topics in the newspapers, difficultiesin maths’ problems and so on. Fang can even be my teacher because she often offersme good advices. We are very happy when we are together. Friendship helps megrow up and I am enjoying my life. We all need friends because friendships arewealth!
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I have many friends,but I have only one good friend.Her name is zhou fang.Fang is my closed friend in our school,After class,we always take a walk in the garden and talk about a lot of things.We talk about the topics in the newspaper,some dfficult math problems and so on.Fang can even be my teather because she often offers me good advice.We are very happy when we get together.Friendship helps me grow and enjoy my life. We all need friends because friendship is wealth!
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