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看一看下面这篇信有没有语法错误。HelloDanielandyourfamily!Howareyou?Doyouknowme?Thesemonths,Icouldn'tw... 看一看下面这篇信有没有语法错误。
Hello Daniel and your family! How are you? Do you know me? These months, I couldn't write some letters because I was very busy. From Monday to Friday, I have to get up at 5:40 every morning, and I get home at 19:10 every night. Sometimes, on weekends I am free. I can sleep late. But every afternoon I must do my homework. I'm busy with my homework. If I finish doing my homework, I can play computer games, badminton, and so on. Last Wednesday, my school hold a Writing Competition, and I got the first prize. And my calssmates gave me some presents. How happy I was! What about you? Are you busy with your study? Are you free? Can you speak Chinese?
As for ***, she is a primary school's student. Do you know? Her teachers like her very much. She is very clever.
Please tell me about your things. And please write back to me soon. Thanks!
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Hello Daniel and your family! How are you? Do you know me? I couldn't write any letters these months because I was very busy. From Monday to Friday, I have to get up at 5:40 every morning, and I get home at 19:10 every night. Sometimes, on weekends I am free and so I can sleep late. But every afternoon I must do my homework. I'm busy with my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can play computer games, badminton, and so on. Last Wednesday, my school held a Writing Competition, and I got the first prize. My classmates gave me some prizes. How happy I was! What about you? Are you also busy with your study? Do you have free time? Can you speak Chinese?
As for ***, she is a primary school student. Do you know that Her teachers like her very much? She is very clever.
Please tell me more about you. And please reply soon. Thanks!
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Hello后面应加“,”,第六行“hold”应是过去式“held”。
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