短文改错 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles.I ho...

短文改错WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawa... 短文改错 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it.One day I saw a secondhand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan .I asked my father the money.So he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school.My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to schoolon my own bicycle.__________________________________________________________________________ 展开

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     When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it .One
                                                            1. friends                                                      2. one
day I saw a secondhand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan.I asked my father∧ the money.
                                              3. which                                                               4. for
So he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself.So I
                5. I
went to sell newspapers after ~~the~~ school.My father was pleasing when I showed him the money
                                       6. 去掉                              7. pleased
a month after .He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school
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on my own bicycle.