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书面表达（满分25分）假设你班在“珍爱生命，拒闯红灯”教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会，请你根据下面的

书面表达（满分25分）假设你班在“珍爱生命，拒闯红灯”教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会，请你根据下面的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。行人（passer-by）闯红灯的危害: 妨碍交通，影响车辆的正常行驶， 容易引发事故，危及他人和自身的安全 ……对行人闯红灯的处罚措施: 批评教育，让其意识到闯红灯的危害， 当场给予警告并罚款注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯参考词汇：jaywalk 乱穿马路

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One possible version: Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of passers-by crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some passers-by don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently. This blocks traffic seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering the safety of passers-by and drivers. In a word, jaywalking produces negative effects and does not help develop good social behavior. It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jaywalking, the passers-by are criticized so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing so, or they are fined on the spot. Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers at their workplace and expose them to the public. However, it will take a long time to stop passers-by from jaywalking. We should start from ourselves right now.

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