Question

假如你是李明，最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落，学习消极应付。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail劝慰他，

假如你是李明，最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落，学习消极应付。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail劝慰他，鼓励他努力学习，并结合自身实际，提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法。词数：100左右Dear Zhang Hua, I’m sorry to hear that_______________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Hua， I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your last exam. You are not the only one who seems to try his best but ends up with a failure in exams. Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don’t want to study hard any longer. I’m sure you know that it’s unwise to do so because you might be left far behind. I was once in the same situation as yours. Failure is the mother of success. In face of failure, what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice. Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success. I truly hope I can be of some help to you. Yours ever, Li Ming

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