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短文改错It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents

短文改错It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up

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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our (us)  us 与teenagers 是同位语 teenagers, so (去掉 so ) 此处为主句my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend (attending) 此处作状语，用在with后，用doing my birthday party, I really had (加an ) experience此处指的是经历，可数名词 unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing (danced) 作并列谓语，and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent (parents) 父母是两个人，要选用复数told me that from then on I was no longer a child and (but)not..but 结构，意为我不再是一个孩子了，而是一个大人了 an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly (responsible)此处与independent是并列关系，作表语. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in (at)常用搭配 that moment when (that)强调句 I felt I was a grown-up. ]

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