Question

高二英语作文 A trip to the sea 120词

去年7月16日,我参加旅行团去山东日照旅游。那天天气很好,我玩的很高兴,但第二天遇到了狂风,我们只能返回酒店休息，当晚听说一个女孩被狂风刮到海里淹死了，我感到很幸运我们都很安全。
要求：1 吸引读者的注意力 2 注意事件顺序 3 跟读者分享自己的情感 4 用生动的语言来使文章更有趣

Answer 1

A trip to the sea
Last july 16th,I participated in a tour group to visit zhizhao in shangdong province. How wonderful the weather was that day and I enjoyed myself.Unexpectable,a violent wind was howling the next day,and we had no choice but to go back to the hotel.That night ,we heared that a girl was threw into the sea by the fiece wind and died,we were touched by the fragility of our life,meanwhile,we felt how lucky we were.
Peoole may die each day,we cannot acknowledge that we are the governor of our own life,because we are not the god,he condemn you to die this moment and you would not catch to the next minite. As a whole,every moment seems valuable in that way,so just keep pace with every minite,share your happiness with your parents,keep contract with your friends,follow your tail which you insist on,donot leave your life a pity.