Question

急。！！ 今晚之前。。根据中文提示,写一篇英语日记,时间是10月12日,星期五。内容如下:

1.今天是你生日。下午5点许多小朋友来你家。
2.他们给了你许多礼物。你们开了一个生日派对。你们吃了一个又大又美味的蛋糕，唱了歌，跳了舞，玩了一个很有趣的游戏，你们玩得很开心。

Answer 1

1楼的仁兄，给的时态不对，有些句子需要斟酌一下.
Today was my birthday, I had a birthday party at home. Lots of my friends came to my house around 5 pm and gave me many presents. During that time, we ate a yummy big cake and sing, dancing in my room. Today, we had lots of fun!
今天是我的生日，我在家举办了一个生日派对。我的朋友在5点左右来到了我家并且给了我许多礼物。在那期间，我们吃了一个美味的大蛋糕，在我的房间里唱歌跳舞。今天，我们过得很愉快！

Answer 2

Today is my birthday.I'm very happy.There are lots of friends come to my home at five o'clock .They give me some presents. We're having a part and eat a delicious cake.We're singing sang and playing games. We're having a great time.Thake you!