Question

英语句子改错

Answer 1

1.
问题较多！主要体现在两点：
1）和原文句意不符。原文把作业负担过重和睡眠不足、缺乏锻炼并列为问题原因，而楼主写成了“作业负担过重导致了睡眠不足和缺乏锻炼”。
2）This
phenomenon前面是句号，说明前面是一个完整的句子，但是你写成了一个介词短语（做原因状语）加一个非限制性定语从句的结构，主句连主语和谓语都没有。
其他还有点语法和搭配等小问题。建议改成：
Nowadays
many
students
suffer
from
health
problems
such
as
obesity
and
short-sightedness,
which
mostly
result
from
too
much
homework,
lack
of
enough
sleep
and
proper
exercise.
This
phenomenon
has
raised
increasing
concern
in
society.
如果用楼主的结构，则pay
attention
to中的to，在被动句中也不能省略。
2.
改写成：For
the
sake
of
lessening
the
students'
pressure,
...
楼主要注意：这也是一个介宾短语（做目的状语），不是单个句子。
是students'，不是student's。
3.
主句问题不大，if从句中的is
turned
into
reality不妥帖。
turn
into
reality意思是“变成现实；实现”，和句意有所差别。
建议改成：If
the
advice
above
is
put
into
practice,
...
put...into
practice是一个固定短语，意思是“把...付诸实践；加以实施”。

Answer 2

1
get
away
from
the
ill
cats.
ill-sick,ill只能做表语，sick既能做表语又能做定语。
2
the
good
is
always
happy.
is-are,the+形容词表示一类人的时候，谓语动词用复数。
3
this
is
a
chinese
interesting
story
book.
this
is
a
interesting
chinese
story
book。英语里面一般是主观形容词在前，客观形容词在后，而且形容词也有其先后顺序。
4
is
there
new
anything
in
today"s
newspaper.
is
there
anything
new
in
today"s
newspaper.形容词修饰不定代词的时候要放在不定代词的后面。
5
the
farmer
has
a
house
with
a
35-feet-tall
tree.
the
farmer
has
a
house
with
a
35-foot-tall
tree.这种错误就相当于，he
is
a
five-years-old
boy.固定用法，记住就行。