Question

改下英语短对话，在线给分30分钟内

大学英语一个对话，是那种应聘类的。请帮忙修改语言。如果能够给重新写一个，我加10分。
A:Good moring,every one.
B:Moring too.Welcome to our company to ?应聘
A：Thank you .Please permit me to introduce myself.My name is ~~~.I am from SiChuan Province.I want to become the manager"s assistant.I believe I can make it.
B: OK.Can you tell me what advantages do you have compared with others.
A:Yon know.As a 大学毕业生，我有极强的实践能力，并且，我可以说三种语言，这在和别人谈生意时是十分重要的

Answer 1

1. Morning too. Welcome to our company to apply for the position.
2. Please permit me to introduce myself.
-> Please allow me to introduce myself. permit太郑重，一般请允许我自我介绍用allow
或：I would like to make a self-introduction first. 我想首先作一自我介绍。
3. I want to become the manager"s assistant.
-> I would like to apply for the position of Assistant to the Manager. 我想申请“经理助理”一职。
4. 最后一段，改成如下：
Well, as a university graduate, I have a strong practical capability. Moreover, I am able to speak in 3 different kinds of languages, English, XX and XX, which may be helpful in the communications and negotiations.
呃，作为一名大学毕业生，我有极强的实践能力。而且，我可以说三种语言：英语，XX和XX，这在与别人沟通和谈判中会有所帮助。