Question

英语好的帮忙看看这句话哪里有问题，有问题的话帮我修改一下，不要翻译

In the final analysis, there are more and more university students plagiarize. It is widely accepted that there are several factors contribute to university students plagiarize. Clearly through, as argued in this essay, pressures are the core driver for university students plagiarizing, because the high expectation of family and high cost of tuition fees put pressure on students, this could influence students to be plagiarized. Overall, if universities do not take serious measures to stop plagiarism, the ranking and reputation of university will drop.

Answer 1

语法：
那个plagiarizing不该是动词，而是plagiarism名词。students 也该改为students'，才更加通顺。前面是contribute to，后面就该是名词。
of the families, 或者from the families
and the high cost，楼主不喜欢the吗？
put pressures，前面是复数，后面咋变单数了
pressures 后面的students前面要加the，因为没有说university students，故而要特指。

this could influence [the] students to [plagizrie]，而不是to be plagiarized.
还有最后一句，写的真是混乱，你到底想说一个大学，还是所有的大学呢？前面是universities,后面是university，如果是多个大学，那排名为什么会降低呢？如果只是一个大学，那就要加"the"

Answer 2

The final analysis shows that plagiarism happened on more and more university students . It is widely accepted that several factors can contribute to university students plagiarism. Clearly, as I argued in this essay, pressures are the core drive for university students plagiarism, because the high expectation of family and high cost of tuition fees put pressure on students, which may influence students to plagiarize. Overall, if universities do not take serious actions to stop plagiarism, their ranking and reputation will drop down.
好好学英语哦~

Answer 3

那个plagiarizing不该是动词，而是plagiarism名词。students 也该改为students'，才更加通顺。前面是contribute to，后面就该是名词。

and the high cost，楼主不喜欢the吗？
put pressures，前面是复数，后面咋变单数了
pressures 后面的students前面要加the，因为没有说university students，故而要特指。

this could influence [the] students to [plagizrie]，而不是to be plagiarized.
还有最后一句，写的真是混乱，你到底想说一个大学，还是所有的大学呢？前面是universities,后面是university，如果是多个大学，那排名为什么会降低呢？如果只是一个大学，那就要加"the"