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每句有一处不合适,请改正,最好能解释一下,本人语法不好。谢谢o(∩_∩)o...采纳后追加10分。1Aloneinadesertedhouse,hewassobusywi... 每句有一处不合适,请改正,最好能解释一下,本人语法不好。谢谢o(∩_∩)o...
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1 Alone in a deserted house, he was so busy with his research work that he felt nothing but lonely.
2 We could provide him with a detached house when he came, but he had specifically asked for a small flat.
3 It suddenly occurred to Anne that mney couldn't make up for what that he had suffered in the past five years.
4 He has too heavy a work load that it is difficult for him to travel.
5 He left orders that nothing ought to be touched until the police arrived here.
6 The United States is composed of 50 states, two of them are separated from the others by land or water.
7 We have told that under no circumstances we may use the telephone in the office for personal affairs.
受益匪浅,非常感谢!!! 可是2.3.还是有点不清楚,另外刚才才发现,第7句是我打漏了been,原本是有的。不知道可不可以再麻烦你帮帮忙,看下这几题? 谢谢你啦!
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1 Alone in a deserted house, he was so busy with his research work that he felt nothing but lonely.把nothing改为anything,因为nothing but是只有的意思,既然他忙于他的研究,就不会再孤单,anything but是根本不的意思,与前面的意思符合。
2 We could provide him with a detached house when he came, but he had specifically asked for a small flat. 应该去掉had,不是太拿得准,这里应该没有过去完成时态的意思。
3 It suddenly occurred to Anne that mney couldn't make up for what that he had suffered in the past five years.把that去掉,what可以引导后面整个句子
4 He has too heavy a work load that it is difficult for him to travel.把a 去掉
5 He left orders that nothing ought to be touched until the police arrived here.把here去掉,arrive是不及物动词,后面不能直接加地名;要加接地名必须和介词in或at连用。较大的地点如城市,国家等用arrive in,较小的地点如学样、车站等用arrive at

6 The United States is composed of 50 states, two of them are separated from the others by land or water.them改为which,如果用them,请加and
7 We have told that under no circumstances we may use the telephone in the office for personal affairs. 把we may 改为may we 因为that后面是一个宾语从句。
该宾语从句以否定意义的短语under no circumstances开头,则该句子必须使用部分倒装结构。
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