Question

本人明年高考请教英语作文满分手段

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；
2. 位置：天安门广场南面；
3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；
4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street
当当车 trolley car
地铁 subway
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. _____________________________________________........

【满分作文】高级词汇1—2个,复杂句(虚拟语气、定从表从、形式主宾等),转折词,

Answer 1

Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street, located south of the ... Square (用过去分词 located [坐落] + 方位副词 south 短语作插入语进行补充说明), is a shopping street, which is famous for its ample supply of goods [货源充足] and brisk market [市场繁荣] (此处用非限制性定语从句). Qianmen Street has a 600 year old history. There are over 300 shops stretching along the both sides of the 600 meter long street (此处用了 there be...+ 现在分词短语 stretching [铺开]), some of which have a style of their own [别具一格], such as tea shops, story-telling showplace theaters, and so on. It is worthy of visiting. You can take No. 17, 59, or 69 Bus or subway
to get there. It is now a pedestrian street, but you can enjoy a trolley car with the clank, clank of it [听着当当声响] to stroll along the street [逛街], .

With highest regards!
Yours，
Li Hua
注：天安门广场翻译为英语不能提交，只好用...Square 取代。

Answer 2

不好意思，我的英语不好。还是找别人帮忙吧