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一篇英语文章，请英语高手，最好是大学教师级别以上的来帮我改错，要改到没有任何语法问题，万分感谢！

It is well known that the first month of newlyweds is called the honeymoon. Do you know where does honeymoon come from? It is said that honeymoon originates from the old conventions of North Europe. The newlyweds should drink honey water or honey wine every day in the first month.

What's more, the newlyweds would take some trips to several places of interest and beautiful venues to indicate the beginning of happy life. For the reason that drink honey water every day make people feel uncomfortable, the convention of drinking honey water in the first month of newlyweds had been abandoned before long. Nevertheless, the tradition of taking a holiday to pretty places to relax and enjoy life had passed down.

There is a legend said that in the old days in Britain, marriage by capture was fairly popular and famous. The husband would take his wife to the countryside and live for a couple of days for fear that his wife would be captured by others. You can see honeycomb anywhere in England at that time. Besides, the Britain has the convention of drinking honey wine since ancient times. As a result, the life of living with partner and drinking honey wine every day in the first month after marriage is named honeymoon.

There is another legend said that honeymoon originates from Ireland in the beginning of 6th century. The Celtic tribe lived there at that time. Alice, the daughter of the chief in the tribe was rather pretty and she liked eating sweety very much. The prince near the tribe often takes a lot of honey to her and made a propose of marrying her. When the princes of other tribes got married, Alice would entertain those guests with wine made of honey. For the reason that Alice made too much wine for guests and there still remained much wine after wedding receptions, the newlyweds went on drinking the remained wine for another month. As a consequence, the local residents imitated Alice's way of making honey wine when their children got married and called the first month of marriage "honeymoon".
simjeong的翻译很不错，非常感谢你的热心相助！但我要的是对这篇英语文章的语法错误的修改，不是中文翻译哈~
这篇文章如果是高中生或刚上大学的同学可能看不出什么语法错误的，所以我需要一位专家级别的精英中的精英帮我修改错误！另外，最好能够改正错误的同时告诉我为什么错了，我现在在外企上班，那群老外讲英语都没语法可循的，搞得我现在有些语法也忘得差不多了。。。囧~~~

Answer 1

离问题结束还有 14 天 23 小时 | 提问者：甄烟 | 检举 It is well known that the first month of newlyweds is called the honeymoon. Do you know where honeymoon COMES from? It is said that honeymoon originates from the old conventions of North Europe. The newlyweds should drink honey water or honey wine every day in the first month.

What's more, the newlyweds would take some trips to several places of interest and beautiful venues to indicate the beginning of happy life. For the reason that DRINKING honey water every day makeS people feel uncomfortable, the convention of drinking honey water in the first month of newlyweds WAS abandoned before long. Nevertheless, the tradition of taking a holiday to pretty places to relax and enjoy life HAS passed down.

There is a legend SAYING that in the old days in Britain, marriage by capture was fairly popular and famous. The husband would take his wife to the countryside and live for a couple of days for fear that his wife would be captured by others. You can see honeycombS anywhere in England at that time. Besides, the Britain has the convention of drinking honey wine since ancient times. As a result, the life of living with partner and drinking honey wine every day in the first month after marriage is named honeymoon.

There is another legend SAYING that honeymoon originates from Ireland AT the beginning of 6th century. The Celtic tribe lived there at that time. Alice, the daughter of the chief in the tribe was rather pretty and she liked eating sweety very much. The prince near the tribe often TOOK a lot of honey to her and made a PROPOSAL of marrying her. When the princes of other tribes got married, Alice would entertain those guests with wine made of honey. For the reason that Alice made too much wine for guests and there still remained much wine after wedding receptions, the newlyweds went on drinking the wine REMAINED for another month. As a consequence, the local residents imitated Alice's way of making honey wine when their children got married and called the first month of marriage "honeymoon".

Answer 2

众所周知，新婚之初的第一个月被称为“蜜月”。“蜜月”的起源在哪里呢？据说是北欧流传的新婚习俗。那里的新人会在结婚之初的头一个月每天都喝蜂蜜水或者是加有蜂蜜的酒。
此外，新人们还会利用这段时间游山玩水以庆祝幸福生活的开始。每天喝蜂蜜水会让一些人感到不舒服，所以这一习俗慢慢就被废弃了，但是新人们到处观光旅游却流传了下来。
还有一个传说，在古代的英国，捕猎性的婚姻一度流行。新浪会将新娘带到乡下住上一阵子，以防自己的妻子被别人抢走。那时的英格兰到处都是蜂窝，而且英国人自古就有喝蜂蜜酒的习惯，所以在结婚之初的一个阅历与心爱的人天天喝蜂蜜酒就被称为“蜜月”。
还有一种说法，“蜜月”一词来源于六世纪的爱尔兰。那时凯尔特人生活在哪里，部落首领的女儿叫做爱丽丝，而她非常喜欢吃甜食。部落周边的王子们经常给她带一些甜食来求婚。在王子和爱丽丝结婚的时候，爱丽丝用蜂蜜酒款待客人们。然而酒做得太多了，一直与客人们走了以后，这对新人用了一个月才将这些蜂蜜酒都喝完。此后，当地的居民在他们的孩子们结婚的时候就效仿爱丽丝的做法，并将婚后第一个月称为“蜜月”

Answer 3

就几个地方错了

It is well known that the first month of newlyweds is called the honeymoon. Do you know where the honeymoon comes from? It is said that the honeymoon originates from the old conventions of North Europe. The newlyweds should drink honey water or honey wine every day in the first month.

What's more, the newlyweds would take some trips to several places of interest and beautiful venues to indicate the beginning of happy life. For the reason that drinking honey water every day makes people feel uncomfortable, the convention of drinking honey water in the first month of newlyweds has been abandoned before long. Nevertheless, the tradition of taking a holiday to pretty places to relax and enjoy life has passed down.

There is a legend that said in the old days in Britain, marriage by capture was fairly popular and famous. The husband would take his wife to the countryside and live for a couple of days for fear that his wife would be captured by others. You can see honeycomb anywhere in England at that time. Besides, the Britain has the convention of drinking honey wine from ancient times. As a result, the life of living with partner and drinking honey wine every day in the first month after marriage is named honeymoon.

There is another legend that said honeymoon originates from Ireland in the beginning of 6th century. The Celtic tribe lived there at that time. Alice, the daughter of the chief in the tribe was rather pretty and she liked eating sweety very much. The prince near the tribe often took a lot of honey to her and made a propose of marrying her. When the princes of other tribes got married, Alice would entertain those guests with wine made of honey. For the reason that Alice made too much wine for guests and there still remained much wine after wedding receptions, the newlyweds went on drinking the remaining wine for another month. As a consequence, the local residents imitated Alice's way of making honey wine when their children got married and called the first month of marriage "honeymoon".